tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post1452495163873407302..comments2023-11-14T22:18:19.759-06:00Comments on A Twist Of Noir: A Twist Of Noir 547 - Phil Beloin Jr.Christopher Granthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11581243409967241320noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-59609900782082376352010-09-09T16:12:59.913-05:002010-09-09T16:12:59.913-05:00"When were they ever?" Powerful line to ..."When were they ever?" Powerful line to begin with, then doubly so with the ending revelation.Naomi Johnsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08005429772070247806noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-27450904302461303472010-08-19T03:51:12.696-05:002010-08-19T03:51:12.696-05:00Great read, Phil. Not a word misplaced. Not a wo...Great read, Phil. Not a word misplaced. Not a word less than it ought. Powerful writing with, as AJ said, a perfectly positioned twist at the end. Brilliant. Thanks, Ian.Ian Ayrisnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-64128029257921974962010-08-17T11:17:04.699-05:002010-08-17T11:17:04.699-05:00"When were they ever?" The positioning o..."When were they ever?" The positioning of that line is just exactly perfect to set up the final line and take the detached observer from shadow to THE BOGEYMAN! RIGHT BEHIND YOU! status. A lot done with a few words. Well planned, well crafted read.AJ Hayesnoreply@blogger.com