tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post2194579191628594282..comments2023-11-14T22:18:19.759-06:00Comments on A Twist Of Noir: A Twist Of Noir 492 - Matthew McBrideChristopher Granthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11581243409967241320noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-55441575481812707362010-07-06T22:31:50.498-05:002010-07-06T22:31:50.498-05:00Ron, kathleen, and A.J.- Thanks so much, I appreci...Ron, kathleen, and A.J.- Thanks so much, I appreciate it. I read it out loud last week at a reading and people seemed to dig it. They laughed. A lot. Glad you all enjoyed it.Matthew McBridehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09436991291191800178noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-28659502389309776782010-07-01T23:32:33.239-05:002010-07-01T23:32:33.239-05:00The action is always clearly defined and diamond s...The action is always clearly defined and diamond sharp. Big props for the "big cock" It's hard to make the reader go chuckling into deepest, darkest noir, but you succeeded. Enjoyed it a lot.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-37748044715665903422010-07-01T23:05:02.291-05:002010-07-01T23:05:02.291-05:00Another wild ride, Matthew! Interesting first line...Another wild ride, Matthew! Interesting first line...Kathleen A. Ryanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10809993168019150186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-90614069558407347542010-07-01T09:34:05.119-05:002010-07-01T09:34:05.119-05:00This is that one in a hundred first person story t...This is that one in a hundred first person story that needs to be told that way. Your narrator's character is all there in the way he talks, uses language. Right down to that use of "myself." Grisly, but I loved it.Ron Scheerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15357501069513854664noreply@blogger.com