tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post3147168472805797477..comments2023-11-14T22:18:19.759-06:00Comments on A Twist Of Noir: A Twist Of Noir 375 - Richard GodwinChristopher Granthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11581243409967241320noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-32945745443987615892010-03-08T17:47:25.954-06:002010-03-08T17:47:25.954-06:00Oh wow! Now this was really dark, and delicious! I...Oh wow! Now this was really dark, and delicious! I really like where you took this story. I think you could extend this into something further...<br /><br />Love the storyline.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-90420803763937689712010-03-06T12:17:45.619-06:002010-03-06T12:17:45.619-06:00I'm with Jodi - twisted. very cold, dry, sardo...I'm with Jodi - twisted. very cold, dry, sardonic and calculating uncomfortable to read, uncomfortably good. well done RG.Michael Solenderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01120045114297450520noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-87557847515172367852010-03-06T12:12:28.946-06:002010-03-06T12:12:28.946-06:00It is said that you can never go back. Well, you ...It is said that you can never go back. Well, you have shown us all that, not only can't we go back, we shouldn't either. His was not a deliberate reenactment of the past, but as someone else said, this has a Twilight Zone aura about it. I really enjoy stories that play with the mind--of the reader, as well as of the characters. Great story, Richard.Joycehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03275503653927579472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-42045316309113002672010-03-06T06:16:12.048-06:002010-03-06T06:16:12.048-06:00Jim Thompson used to do this type POV brilliantly ...Jim Thompson used to do this type POV brilliantly and usettlingly. As do you, Mr G.Paul D Brazillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12881642426845398389noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-10178237931700738902010-03-06T06:10:15.398-06:002010-03-06T06:10:15.398-06:00This is real Twilight Zone territory, edgy, brilli...This is real Twilight Zone territory, edgy, brilliantly done.Unknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00589540873737429455noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-55640090903441171552010-03-06T06:05:38.036-06:002010-03-06T06:05:38.036-06:00This is a neat concept well executed.This is a neat concept well executed.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16095983730111707059noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-74802820722303834822010-03-05T20:51:07.203-06:002010-03-05T20:51:07.203-06:00Just when it couldn't get more twisted - it di...Just when it couldn't get more twisted - it did. Deep. Good pacing. Nicely told.Jodi MacArthurhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13373591664178281529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-39831304713848550612010-03-05T17:54:29.598-06:002010-03-05T17:54:29.598-06:00You’ve been in a head-messing mood these days, dea...You’ve been in a head-messing mood these days, dear sir. Like <em>Agent’s Dream</em> brought readers gradually to the realization they’re dealing with a psycho, so does <em>Aarlsville</em>. Either that or this dude exists simultaneously in an alternative universe. Either way, not an easy thing to pull off, but of course you did because you can. Good show!Miss Alisterhttp://missalister.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-34522573087799125352010-03-05T14:12:52.561-06:002010-03-05T14:12:52.561-06:00i found a bit of foreshadowing here.. even so, yo...i found a bit of foreshadowing here.. even so, you put this tale together in a tight little package.<br /><br />nicely done.quin brownehttp://www.quinbrowne-words.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.com