tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post4866415152690334178..comments2023-11-14T22:18:19.759-06:00Comments on A Twist Of Noir: A Twist Of Noir 460 - Paul D. BrazillChristopher Granthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11581243409967241320noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-17871844493206186852010-06-19T12:04:51.341-05:002010-06-19T12:04:51.341-05:00Oh, such a heartwarming tale. I think he actually ...Oh, such a heartwarming tale. I think he actually loves being a house daddy.Pamila Paynehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14398900249578356483noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-23332021670963031592010-05-23T10:13:58.164-05:002010-05-23T10:13:58.164-05:00It'd be my pleasure to host the follow-up here...It'd be my pleasure to host the follow-up here at ATON, Paul.Christopher Granthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11581243409967241320noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-60279324738573882382010-05-23T05:11:23.191-05:002010-05-23T05:11:23.191-05:00Cheers all. I've got a follow up in 'da wo...Cheers all. I've got a follow up in 'da woiks'.Paul D Brazillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12881642426845398389noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-1162793505099682642010-05-20T02:26:49.632-05:002010-05-20T02:26:49.632-05:00You had me at the title, Paul and never let me go....You had me at the title, Paul and never let me go. Excellent story.Katherine Tomlinsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09696623795926663895noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-3523683032131150372010-05-19T19:11:08.070-05:002010-05-19T19:11:08.070-05:00Jeanette, it's not a record here at ATON (Robe...Jeanette, it's not a record here at ATON (Robert Crisman has the most stories here with twenty-nine and Michael J. Solender has eighteen) but Paul is up there and, as I said, a real cornerstone of this site.Christopher Granthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11581243409967241320noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-76984227854529310472010-05-19T18:49:28.320-05:002010-05-19T18:49:28.320-05:00There is not much left to say after all the great ...There is not much left to say after all the great comments you have recieved. Earlier you questioned in an email to us that you wondered if you did a good job on this one. I think you got your answer. Congrats on your fifteenth story on A Twist of Noir. That might be a record(??)Thanks for the entertainment.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-22474531447717129682010-05-19T16:09:45.672-05:002010-05-19T16:09:45.672-05:00Thanks evryone. Thanks to Christopher for letting ...Thanks evryone. Thanks to Christopher for letting me into his cyber home again!Paul D Brazillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12881642426845398389noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-38531028194327547782010-05-19T15:19:05.091-05:002010-05-19T15:19:05.091-05:00Wow, impressive turnout of work, Paul and fun stor...Wow, impressive turnout of work, Paul and fun story.Conda Douglashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12972790965426924941noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-70062711176570118022010-05-19T14:19:11.858-05:002010-05-19T14:19:11.858-05:00As always, you have the knack of fitting the voice...As always, you have the knack of fitting the voice to the development of the plot, so there's never a second the reader wonders if your characters mean business or are lost in the wrong story!Salvatore Buttacihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17477098872186908154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-46410973123729116182010-05-19T14:16:27.159-05:002010-05-19T14:16:27.159-05:00I enjoyed that, Paul. Agree with Frank that you ha...I enjoyed that, Paul. Agree with Frank that you have the flow happening.David Cranmerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04749857752139212888noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-75582957502374731102010-05-19T11:42:53.470-05:002010-05-19T11:42:53.470-05:00Very original. Gotta love this crude but lively wa...Very original. Gotta love this crude but lively way to start a family.Johnny Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09331922440148855362noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-75496304516052956712010-05-19T09:15:09.096-05:002010-05-19T09:15:09.096-05:00Paul, great story. You've become quite the wor...Paul, great story. You've become quite the wordsmith. Love the flow.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05268979596402277128noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-63441248279908308172010-05-19T06:44:19.480-05:002010-05-19T06:44:19.480-05:00Happy Fifteeneth, Paul.
This is why I referred to...Happy Fifteeneth, Paul.<br /><br />This is why I referred to you as a cornerstone of the site in the comments section of your interview with David Cranmer.<br /><br />Even more fun is to be had with the fact that every one of your stories fits on one page when you click on your name on the sidebar.<br /><br />Which just goes to prove, it's not how many words you use, it's how you use them.<br /><br />And you, sir, use them very well, indeed.Christopher Granthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11581243409967241320noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-62807174269055940992010-05-19T06:24:13.381-05:002010-05-19T06:24:13.381-05:00a great opener and it only gets better. congrats o...a great opener and it only gets better. congrats on #15. you are a noir machine and truly deserving of the moniker, you BIG BAMBOOZLER you!Michael Solenderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01120045114297450520noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-66708712693043851062010-05-19T06:23:09.302-05:002010-05-19T06:23:09.302-05:00"I sipped my drink and gazed up at Phil Colli..."I sipped my drink and gazed up at Phil Collins on the TV in the corner of the room and thought of how much he looked like he was wearing a stocking mask."<br /><br />The cultural details you put into your tight stories always make them a great read, great work Paul.Lee Hugheshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10625970674709103188noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-6434547325184813302010-05-18T16:55:49.541-05:002010-05-18T16:55:49.541-05:00Paul you really nail this so well, the cadence of ...Paul you really nail this so well, the cadence of a quick tell, a grand story and one hell of a smashing ending. <br /><br />Excellent stuff.Carrie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05093923008179106837noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-58787583886166549742010-05-18T16:46:30.559-05:002010-05-18T16:46:30.559-05:00Neatly told. Witty, noir, mean and tight.Neatly told. Witty, noir, mean and tight.Richard Godwinhttp://richardgodwin.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-52034647863273772052010-05-18T16:25:28.405-05:002010-05-18T16:25:28.405-05:00It's true. Marriage (and deep cleavage) will ...It's true. Marriage (and deep cleavage) will change you.B.R. Statehamhttp://brstateham.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-36803608395191231752010-05-18T16:17:27.436-05:002010-05-18T16:17:27.436-05:00How refreshing to read something I get all the cul...How refreshing to read something I get all the cultural references to, being an Essex girl myself (though from Arijaba)Sandra Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11788472031698175632noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-40453561345020183852010-05-18T16:15:53.184-05:002010-05-18T16:15:53.184-05:00Thanks lads. Cormac's challenge was probably a...Thanks lads. Cormac's challenge was probably a bit easy for me that week as I came up with the starter sentence and then it all poured out from there. As it were.Paul D Brazillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12881642426845398389noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-24610177830994082832010-05-18T16:14:34.765-05:002010-05-18T16:14:34.765-05:00"Velvet answered the door in a red leather dr..."Velvet answered the door in a red leather dress that was made with just about enough material to make a wallet"<br /><br />Love that line. Excellent piece--the voice is pitch perfect and the twist at the end is classic.Chris Rhatiganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05769089157184374652noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-82545938211992212592010-05-18T12:55:58.573-05:002010-05-18T12:55:58.573-05:00The old bait and switch, well played.The old bait and switch, well played.Al Tuchernoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-62736661955787080642010-05-18T12:02:07.735-05:002010-05-18T12:02:07.735-05:00Good stuff. Class craic as usual.Good stuff. Class craic as usual.Authorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12033131935968488175noreply@blogger.com