tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post5247015198956097518..comments2023-11-14T22:18:19.759-06:00Comments on A Twist Of Noir: Interlude Stories: Iain CosgroveChristopher Granthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11581243409967241320noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-77329910145279781612011-06-17T05:52:24.327-05:002011-06-17T05:52:24.327-05:00Paul,
Thanks - Glad it worked. Not as dark as som...Paul,<br /><br />Thanks - Glad it worked. Not as dark as some of my other work, but glad it worked for you.<br /><br />ajhayes2,<br /><br />I like using the mirror first/last if it works (which I think it did here.) Would you believe I wrote the guts of this story in 1989 - recession is definitely cyclical!<br /><br />Sean,<br /><br />Some of the inspiration for this story came after I actually tripped over a homeless person outside a railway station in London (but the rest is my fevered imagination) <br /><br />Thanks to all for reading!Iain6566https://www.blogger.com/profile/00667062052890417831noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-12326896347444915952011-06-13T08:51:26.425-05:002011-06-13T08:51:26.425-05:00great job. Some nice lines thoughout as well. Espe...great job. Some nice lines thoughout as well. Especially liked the homeless part of it and how you worked it into the story.Sean Patrick Reardonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14051252366031997054noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-11039632540683413432011-06-11T19:30:21.912-05:002011-06-11T19:30:21.912-05:00The symmetry of the first and last lines of this g...The symmetry of the first and last lines of this grim and gritty piece is exactly perfect. A a great head snapper (literally). Cool.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-5183528799366295662011-06-10T23:40:55.642-05:002011-06-10T23:40:55.642-05:00Pretty cold out in the scary dark. There's way...Pretty cold out in the scary dark. There's ways out. Dave found one of them pretty fast with an overdose of comeuppance. The mirrored first/last sentence is brilliant. Hard and grim and like most those things, well earned. Cool.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-45985058383076149372011-06-10T13:49:31.261-05:002011-06-10T13:49:31.261-05:00Harsh!
I like it!Harsh!<br /><br />I like it!Paul D Brazillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12881642426845398389noreply@blogger.com