tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post6471239236051206274..comments2023-11-14T22:18:19.759-06:00Comments on A Twist Of Noir: A Twist Of Noir 608 - Col BuryChristopher Granthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11581243409967241320noreply@blogger.comBlogger26125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-81740064357730511442010-11-21T07:18:51.463-06:002010-11-21T07:18:51.463-06:00Thanks, Kelly.
Glad you enjoyed it.Thanks, Kelly. <br />Glad you enjoyed it.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17913040012695421077noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-36105069347283697582010-10-30T12:31:56.215-05:002010-10-30T12:31:56.215-05:00Wickedly... wicked. Very dark and humorous. Enjoye...Wickedly... wicked. Very dark and humorous. Enjoyed it.<br />KellyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-5316265781563472582010-10-29T15:03:40.816-05:002010-10-29T15:03:40.816-05:00Mikey,
I promise!
Steve,
Cheers.Mikey,<br />I promise!<br />Steve,<br />Cheers.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17913040012695421077noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-36138594461400551712010-10-27T13:39:52.575-05:002010-10-27T13:39:52.575-05:00oh, cool stuffoh, cool stuffSteve Weddlehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03876211586767139613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-4387035738511021682010-10-25T12:29:42.046-05:002010-10-25T12:29:42.046-05:00a wild wild ride Col, You sure you ain't been ...a wild wild ride Col, You sure you ain't been there?Michael Solenderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01120045114297450520noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-780783991280883432010-10-24T06:36:02.525-05:002010-10-24T06:36:02.525-05:00Annie / Joyce,
Thanks for dropping by 'n' ...Annie / Joyce,<br />Thanks for dropping by 'n' commenting - really glad you liked it. <br />Regards,<br />ColAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17913040012695421077noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-58642409566347031672010-10-23T11:56:33.878-05:002010-10-23T11:56:33.878-05:00Wow, Col. This one hits you like a brick. Great ...Wow, Col. This one hits you like a brick. Great voice, very engaging character, and then the end? That's about as dark as it gets. Well done.Joycehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03275503653927579472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-28236035180258485772010-10-22T15:47:57.111-05:002010-10-22T15:47:57.111-05:00Wow.. Great writing skill. I love the way you grad...Wow.. Great writing skill. I love the way you gradually built up the main character and his traits, and in a concurrent thread, hinted at (using a repitition of 'I always drive') the shocking conclusion.Annie (Lady M) xhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00086309578820420578noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-1287070702433770932010-10-22T13:35:30.839-05:002010-10-22T13:35:30.839-05:00Matt,
Cheers - first person is rare for me, but it...Matt,<br />Cheers - first person is rare for me, but it seems to have worked.<br /><br />Gary,<br />Really chuffed you liked it, and the line you refer to was a late addition to get the word count up. I always fondly recall an image from one of your stories when some killer slipped on a tit - LOL! <br /><br />Regards,<br />ColAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17913040012695421077noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-21607012888697562972010-10-22T04:52:53.661-05:002010-10-22T04:52:53.661-05:00Loved that image of the guy singing Wild Boys whil...Loved that image of the guy singing Wild Boys while getting laid. Started off in the shit and ended up in the shit. Really enjoyed that.Gary Dobbs/Jack Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10935686140719743351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-59605913681084831782010-10-20T17:19:59.663-05:002010-10-20T17:19:59.663-05:00Cheers, Al.
AJ,
Cool analogy!Cheers, Al.<br /><br />AJ,<br />Cool analogy!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17913040012695421077noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-31557280794973279892010-10-20T13:08:00.424-05:002010-10-20T13:08:00.424-05:00Top read, Col. Loved the change of voice, bud.Top read, Col. Loved the change of voice, bud.Authorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12033131935968488175noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-22013869921018783252010-10-18T08:10:29.161-05:002010-10-18T08:10:29.161-05:00Couldn't have happened to a nicer guy!Couldn't have happened to a nicer guy!Al Tucherhttp://alberttucher.writersresidence.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-12265162053662747782010-10-18T02:12:33.563-05:002010-10-18T02:12:33.563-05:00Story shifts gears so smooth you don't realize...Story shifts gears so smooth you don't realize you're doing 80 in a 25 zone until the sudden stop fetches you up against the consequences and a piece of jailhouse justice. Great read.AJ Hayesnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-63827188209304382462010-10-17T07:46:38.904-05:002010-10-17T07:46:38.904-05:00I was a tad apprehensive about this one, as I'...I was a tad apprehensive about this one, as I've not done a short for a while, plus I rarely use present tense. Thought it would help with immediacy.<br /><br />Richard,<br />'Black satire'... I like that description.<br /><br />Al,<br />As always, cheers, bud.<br /><br />Dave n Paul,<br />Ta very much, chaps. For the record, I have not been to Long Legs... I'm a family man you see.<br /><br />Lil, <br />Just hope someone gives me a chance with the novel...<br /><br />Kevin,<br />Thank you.<br /><br />Pattinase,<br />LOL!<br /><br />Jeanette,<br />I don't frequent those places... honest!<br /><br />Sean,<br />Glad you liked it, especially the ending, since I cocked up n missed the very last line. Seems it still works though. Gonna blog about this soon.<br /><br />John, <br />Means a lot, cheers.<br /><br />Regards to all n thanks for commenting.<br />ColAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17913040012695421077noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-67418913044049132172010-10-16T11:56:55.187-05:002010-10-16T11:56:55.187-05:00Paul, Long Legs is a "caugh" lap dancing...Paul, Long Legs is a "caugh" lap dancing bar in the centre of Manchester. Nuff said...David Barberhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05006533626998905560noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-88307286496254497562010-10-15T17:03:20.540-05:002010-10-15T17:03:20.540-05:00Adding a well deserved brilliant to the collection...Adding a well deserved brilliant to the collection.jrlindermuthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09204855909246670628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-55840120947142579192010-10-15T15:48:17.148-05:002010-10-15T15:48:17.148-05:00Great job, well written, and a great ending, which...Great job, well written, and a great ending, which cough me off guardSean Patrick Reardonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14051252366031997054noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-36017024645522095092010-10-15T13:52:54.885-05:002010-10-15T13:52:54.885-05:00Well, Col. Now I know how you fellas swing. But I ...Well, Col. Now I know how you fellas swing. But I have to ask...<br />Are you that busy without the five grand? Good stuff!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-28045594606771124882010-10-15T12:53:20.508-05:002010-10-15T12:53:20.508-05:00This has more atmosphere than a Saturday night in ...This has more atmosphere than a Saturday night in Detroit.pattinase (abbott)https://www.blogger.com/profile/02916037185235335846noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-8752338266554875762010-10-15T12:50:25.421-05:002010-10-15T12:50:25.421-05:00Excellent story.. Great voice and a real strong na...Excellent story.. Great voice and a real strong narrative.<br /><br />Well done- <br />KMKevin Michaelshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00703125974467675009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-84011167183382268512010-10-15T12:26:52.959-05:002010-10-15T12:26:52.959-05:00Brilliant, just brilliant. We've missed your s...Brilliant, just brilliant. We've missed your stuff since 'the novel'! Makes looking forward to that even more itchy.Lily Childshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15861288507716873813noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-77801760324456113922010-10-15T12:21:30.857-05:002010-10-15T12:21:30.857-05:00I loved that. Where exactly is Long Legs? For rese...I loved that. Where exactly is Long Legs? For research purposes, you understand ...Paul D Brazillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12881642426845398389noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-50210010978294359252010-10-15T11:02:44.522-05:002010-10-15T11:02:44.522-05:00Nice one, Col. You painted a great picture with s...Nice one, Col. You painted a great picture with some great writing. <br /><br />Long Legs - Been there..... :-)David Barberhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05006533626998905560noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-18567641434119209792010-10-15T10:39:15.462-05:002010-10-15T10:39:15.462-05:00Very nicely done Col, this has a great voice runni...Very nicely done Col, this has a great voice running all the way through it. Yeah, a top job, fella – really well done.Alan Griffithshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12890190137499272096noreply@blogger.com