tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post4797155265829383284..comments2023-11-14T22:18:19.759-06:00Comments on A Twist Of Noir: A Twist Of Noir 169 - Gavin BellChristopher Granthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11581243409967241320noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-76969515661642280892009-09-17T06:56:28.372-05:002009-09-17T06:56:28.372-05:00What a cracking story! Look forward to more.What a cracking story! Look forward to more.Paul D Brazillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12881642426845398389noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-72807313528686753932009-09-17T05:12:46.139-05:002009-09-17T05:12:46.139-05:00Thanks for the comments everyone!
Christopher - t...Thanks for the comments everyone!<br /><br />Christopher - that was completely unintentional, which is weird as I'm a huge Stones fan and Sympathy for the Devil is one of my all-time favourite songs.<br /><br />It works brilliantly as foreshadowing though, so if you don't mind I'll pretend that was exactly what I intended from now on!Gavin Bellnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-11718553950888105942009-09-16T08:22:04.928-05:002009-09-16T08:22:04.928-05:00Something I noticed but didn't remember to men...Something I noticed but didn't remember to mention in my e-mail to Gavin.<br /><br />This:<br /><br /><br />Leather’s breakfast arrived. Lisa decided to take the opportunity to find out if he had a real name.<br /><br />“I’m Lisa, by the way,” she said, holding out a hand.<br /><br />Leather took it and politely swallowed his mouthful of bacon before responding, “Pleased to meet you.”<br /><br />Lisa smiled patiently, “Am I supposed to guess your name?”<br /><br /><br />Gavin's sly nod to The Rolling Stones' Sympathy For The Devil.Christopher Granthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11581243409967241320noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-42144320741536803392009-09-16T08:11:32.794-05:002009-09-16T08:11:32.794-05:00Love the sly way the newspaper headlines set the h...Love the sly way the newspaper headlines set the hook.Al Tuchernoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-46699022525274623802009-09-16T07:00:37.110-05:002009-09-16T07:00:37.110-05:00Nice character sketch. Nice premise. Good pay-off ...Nice character sketch. Nice premise. Good pay-off (especially for our Lisa). Like it.Des Nnochirihttp://desnnochiri.250free.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-54793110782542166512009-09-15T14:37:55.374-05:002009-09-15T14:37:55.374-05:00Great story, Gavin. Good thing she took the hint....Great story, Gavin. Good thing she took the hint. Terrific ending.Joycehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03275503653927579472noreply@blogger.com