tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post5745452827653542048..comments2023-11-14T22:18:19.759-06:00Comments on A Twist Of Noir: A Twist Of Noir 581 - Dana KingChristopher Granthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11581243409967241320noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-30533593858147785652010-09-23T15:58:01.172-05:002010-09-23T15:58:01.172-05:00I liked the pacing and realism of this: The explor...I liked the pacing and realism of this: The exploration of what a hitman's life and skills would really be.M. C. Funkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00088827164403855506noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-21016493240727231862010-09-22T09:22:24.252-05:002010-09-22T09:22:24.252-05:00Hey, I know these people ... very clever stuff.Hey, I know these people ... very clever stuff.Charlieoperahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08876755029099726686noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-52136585568935285522010-09-21T19:16:54.752-05:002010-09-21T19:16:54.752-05:00Thanks to all who commented. I'm glad you enjo...Thanks to all who commented. I'm glad you enjoyed it.<br /><br />And, once again, thanks to Christopher for the opportunity.Dana Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01350344882342624735noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-768316345167404992010-09-21T17:44:40.596-05:002010-09-21T17:44:40.596-05:00And it is a great juxtaposition reminding us that ...And it is a great juxtaposition reminding us that no one is beyond the prosaic details of life.pattinase (abbott)https://www.blogger.com/profile/02916037185235335846noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-23984075172331654902010-09-21T15:11:37.915-05:002010-09-21T15:11:37.915-05:00Oh, really a slick story, Dana. Loved this one. ...Oh, really a slick story, Dana. Loved this one. Terrific characters too.Joycehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03275503653927579472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-5662062687544552982010-09-21T08:01:55.642-05:002010-09-21T08:01:55.642-05:00"Paperwork and wet work don’t go well togethe..."Paperwork and wet work don’t go well together."<br /><br />Great line. A lot of great lines. They add up to a great story, thanks for posting it.John McFetridgehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09442198820998606682noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-32546843729295436832010-09-21T06:44:32.535-05:002010-09-21T06:44:32.535-05:00Tough job to make a tale keeping pulling me in wit...Tough job to make a tale keeping pulling me in with no dialogue. You did it, Dana. Nice.Jack Getzehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09516237388744739669noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-90416841371383383222010-09-21T01:56:19.320-05:002010-09-21T01:56:19.320-05:00Life and times of a small business man. Loved that...Life and times of a small business man. Loved that. My breakfast story.Paul D Brazillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12881642426845398389noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-10822938517187032122010-09-21T00:05:51.977-05:002010-09-21T00:05:51.977-05:00People always underestimate what a bathroom is gon...People always underestimate what a bathroom is gonna cost.Naomi Johnsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08005429772070247806noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-11531329514804549592010-09-20T20:07:57.528-05:002010-09-20T20:07:57.528-05:00The big wheel turns then clicks to a stop. You nev...The big wheel turns then clicks to a stop. You never know whose numbers coming up, even if it's your own. Puts a whole new light on "Can't live with 'em. Can't live without 'em." Who'da thought a bathroom could cost so much. Nifty tale. Told sharp and fast. Cool.AJ Hayesnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-63479936999298716092010-09-20T19:50:15.864-05:002010-09-20T19:50:15.864-05:00I was trying to figure your angle all the way to t...I was trying to figure your angle all the way to the end -- who was Doris, what was really going down. And I had to grin at the end -- yep, loose ends.<br /><br />I like an organized woman.R.S. Bohnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09101260459422806220noreply@blogger.com