tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post6936245371915138498..comments2023-11-14T22:18:19.759-06:00Comments on A Twist Of Noir: A Twist Of Noir 614 - Gary M. DobbsChristopher Granthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11581243409967241320noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-39614585412272293832010-10-30T11:57:24.419-05:002010-10-30T11:57:24.419-05:00Very 1984.
Can almost feel the control oozing out ...Very 1984.<br />Can almost feel the control oozing out of the computer screen.<br />KellyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-57151859789926698832010-10-29T10:33:13.010-05:002010-10-29T10:33:13.010-05:00Gets the thumbs up from me, Gary. Original and sca...Gets the thumbs up from me, Gary. Original and scary and very well written.Alan Griffithshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12890190137499272096noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-85531378032706810712010-10-28T13:12:31.194-05:002010-10-28T13:12:31.194-05:00Scary and distopean. very , very good use of 614 w...Scary and distopean. very , very good use of 614 words.Paul D Brazillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12881642426845398389noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-12020262806807033742010-10-28T12:39:19.385-05:002010-10-28T12:39:19.385-05:00Thanks guys - I was trying to come up with an idea...Thanks guys - I was trying to come up with an idea for something that could be told in 614 words and this thing popped into my head (614 times a second, in fact) and spewed from my fingers onto the screen. I guess that within the fiction lies a message and a warning. Things are really getting scary.Gary Dobbs/Jack Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10935686140719743351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-64021397447511285262010-10-27T19:47:07.581-05:002010-10-27T19:47:07.581-05:00Neat! The message in there has a plausible ring. A...Neat! The message in there has a plausible ring. Already we have small armies who want to tell us what we can read, write, and say. Is "614" mind control the next step on the road we know as political correctness?Chap O'Keefehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04404176810063857291noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-52170591529861515952010-10-26T23:35:13.006-05:002010-10-26T23:35:13.006-05:00Frightening. Really makes you wonder... I liked ...Frightening. Really makes you wonder... I liked it too, even though it makes me want to shut everything off in the house.Joycehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03275503653927579472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-25425412457579476472010-10-26T23:33:26.001-05:002010-10-26T23:33:26.001-05:00Ominous and shadowy. Delusion or reality? Doesn...Ominous and shadowy. Delusion or reality? Doesn't matter. When the door comes down he's going to die. Of course he's just a delusional personality. Isn't he? Really? Are you sure? Better get on your Blackberry and research it . . . or should you. Remember, that door's coming down. Great story!AJ Hayesnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-57682144983644410982010-10-25T10:55:43.219-05:002010-10-25T10:55:43.219-05:00Ominous feeling here, Gary. How are you?Ominous feeling here, Gary. How are you?pattinase (abbott)https://www.blogger.com/profile/02916037185235335846noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-18910140166085733512010-10-25T10:49:31.046-05:002010-10-25T10:49:31.046-05:00I'm with David; I very much liked that too.I'm with David; I very much liked that too.Chad Eagletonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06863680540230538227noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-67356034996277156702010-10-25T10:21:10.737-05:002010-10-25T10:21:10.737-05:00I can pretty much believe in the truth of this one...I can pretty much believe in the truth of this one.Charles Gramlichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-29236678948039408082010-10-25T09:07:20.961-05:002010-10-25T09:07:20.961-05:00I very much liked that.I very much liked that.David Cranmerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04749857752139212888noreply@blogger.com