tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post7094185992645408239..comments2023-11-14T22:18:19.759-06:00Comments on A Twist Of Noir: A Twist Of Noir 478 - Copper SmithChristopher Granthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11581243409967241320noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-44124365121905523312010-06-27T19:37:36.479-05:002010-06-27T19:37:36.479-05:00I saw the ending coming, but the view was too damn...I saw the ending coming, but the view was too damn beautifully constructed to want to look elsewhere. Terrific writing in terms of pace and plotting - everything apportioned so neatly. That really made it sing. And some of the reflection stabbed right for the ribs and twisted when it hit home. Great work, Copper.M C Funkhttp://www.matthewfunk.netnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-66518156949132257522010-06-21T13:30:31.342-05:002010-06-21T13:30:31.342-05:00Great work.Tightly done.Great work.Tightly done.Paul D Brazillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12881642426845398389noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-20586220803851817882010-06-21T00:40:15.729-05:002010-06-21T00:40:15.729-05:00Twist worked great and you played it straight, war...Twist worked great and you played it straight, warned us about it right off, hid it in the dialoguesm then slammed it home. Enjoyed this a lot.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-45568052424413878822010-06-20T19:10:12.370-05:002010-06-20T19:10:12.370-05:00Thanks for the kind words, all.
Of course, the op...Thanks for the kind words, all.<br /><br />Of course, the open-ended conclusion leaves room for a sequel. Maybe someday I'll try 'Do it again' or 'Peg.'David Copperhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13181561096067498064noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-2286513550734458172010-06-20T11:04:09.165-05:002010-06-20T11:04:09.165-05:00Excellant. Great build up and nice twist. Should h...Excellant. Great build up and nice twist. Should have seen it coming, but you were too smooth.Pamila Paynehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14398900249578356483noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-24255638500099604822010-06-20T10:43:17.013-05:002010-06-20T10:43:17.013-05:00Tense, terse writing, and I agree about the great ...Tense, terse writing, and I agree about the great twist.Al Tuchernoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-54238353496786605542010-06-20T03:12:03.549-05:002010-06-20T03:12:03.549-05:00Great music and use of ambience, you can hear the ...Great music and use of ambience, you can hear the nuance in the narrative, the Steely Dan sophistication.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-9856628719088026532010-06-19T09:17:16.410-05:002010-06-19T09:17:16.410-05:00great tension and voice and nice ending twist..great tension and voice and nice ending twist..Michael Solenderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01120045114297450520noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-87849696386907822382010-06-19T02:27:17.560-05:002010-06-19T02:27:17.560-05:00Wow. Great story. Marvelous writing. I enjoyed the...Wow. Great story. Marvelous writing. I enjoyed the visuals, tension and foreshadowing a great deal.Melissa Emeraldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01130908278548033843noreply@blogger.com