tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post7857816080098400797..comments2023-11-14T22:18:19.759-06:00Comments on A Twist Of Noir: A Twist Of Noir 452 - Richard GodwinChristopher Granthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11581243409967241320noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-7542840845063023602010-05-22T20:40:55.801-05:002010-05-22T20:40:55.801-05:00This is magnificent, Richard. Very gritty, lots o...This is magnificent, Richard. Very gritty, lots of action, and oh so dark all the way through. The images are all extremely disturbing, as are the characters. Perfect noir.Joycehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03275503653927579472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-50493092721342497332010-05-15T14:23:15.609-05:002010-05-15T14:23:15.609-05:00"Relentless Fire" ~ wow, what a ride tha..."Relentless Fire" ~ wow, what a ride that was. Your descriptions and dialogue are terrific. I had to read all the way to the end. Wild stuff! Good job, Richard ~ & good luck in the contest.Kathleen A. Ryanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10809993168019150186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-79909085373046605442010-05-13T21:42:31.066-05:002010-05-13T21:42:31.066-05:00Thank you all for your comments. Much appreciated....Thank you all for your comments. Much appreciated.Richard Godwinhttp://rgodwin.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-83820303881599066882010-05-13T17:14:32.816-05:002010-05-13T17:14:32.816-05:00Jesus, Richard. What a barrage of imagery! Well ...Jesus, Richard. What a barrage of imagery! Well executed. True to form, genre- and Godwin-wise. And the latter of late has meant even more poetical beauties like sky the colour of torn steak and the smell of flesh rising like a wraith into the air in <em>addition</em> to the hard core, the ripped-out organs, claw-hammered jaws and body-burning and all. Supreme.Miss Alisterhttp://missalister.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-26736719667484715282010-05-12T21:29:38.844-05:002010-05-12T21:29:38.844-05:00"And the sun bled magenta onto the hills and ..."And the sun bled magenta onto the hills and caught the edge of his shovel as he cracked the dry earth."<br /><br />I loved this visual. Infact, the whole story was visual. My jaw aches out of empathy. ;-)<br /><br />This is very dark and gory. Mike said what I was thinking. It felt like a mini series in the making. Nice title too.Jodi MacArthurhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13373591664178281529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-49612628095878754722010-05-12T18:24:17.164-05:002010-05-12T18:24:17.164-05:00I enjoyed a lot of the imagery in this. It tended ...I enjoyed a lot of the imagery in this. It tended to leave stains.<br /><br />The grim and gritty premise was also very much to my personal liking.Matthew C. Funkhttp://www.matthewfunk.netnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-59126116921857293402010-05-12T15:07:39.446-05:002010-05-12T15:07:39.446-05:00Wow, lots of blood guts and gore... I have a thing...Wow, lots of blood guts and gore... I have a thing for blood guts and gore and you just made my day Richard! Excellent piece.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-50647636080950678072010-05-12T12:53:12.993-05:002010-05-12T12:53:12.993-05:00Let me say in the best possible way.
EW!
Nice...Let me say in the best possible way.<br /><br /><br /><i>EW!</i><br /><br /><br /><br />Nice plot...quin brownehttp://www.quinbrowne.netnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-62948710345155393652010-05-12T11:32:25.656-05:002010-05-12T11:32:25.656-05:00This was a lot to take in. Great twists, lots of g...This was a lot to take in. Great twists, lots of gore, and some home-spun philosophy.Thom Gabrukiewiczhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13286670695334830471noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-60528614338427025692010-05-12T10:38:37.972-05:002010-05-12T10:38:37.972-05:00quiet an epic endeavor. no shortage of action or d...quiet an epic endeavor. no shortage of action or descriptions. there is a mini-series in here somewhere.Michael Solenderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01120045114297450520noreply@blogger.com