tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post8241188824498847842..comments2023-11-14T22:18:19.759-06:00Comments on A Twist Of Noir: A Twist Of Noir 559 - Ian AyrisChristopher Granthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11581243409967241320noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-63846518735394714212010-12-02T12:17:58.225-06:002010-12-02T12:17:58.225-06:00Marvelous, simply perfect voice, humor and grit. A...Marvelous, simply perfect voice, humor and grit. A great combination Ian, can't believe I missed this one a 10 all the way.Michael Solenderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01120045114297450520noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-83816814713496615732010-09-13T21:47:01.323-05:002010-09-13T21:47:01.323-05:00You're ridiculously talented, Ian. You're ...You're ridiculously talented, Ian. You're going places, m'man.Naomi Johnsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08005429772070247806noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-5210877776384425762010-09-01T06:34:11.945-05:002010-09-01T06:34:11.945-05:00Perfectly crafted, great scenography, characterisa...Perfectly crafted, great scenography, characterisation and ending - love it!Chris Pollardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05857306763830589247noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-61724971683296247802010-08-30T18:01:45.209-05:002010-08-30T18:01:45.209-05:00Great song to this. Impressive character as well. ...Great song to this. Impressive character as well. And a neat little plot for them to build a home together in.<br /><br />Well made, Ian.M. C. Funkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00088827164403855506noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-47318776817550202632010-08-27T07:10:32.746-05:002010-08-27T07:10:32.746-05:00Like Jodi says, the hitman's voice is gripping...Like Jodi says, the hitman's voice is gripping. Love the Cockney accent, adds to this piece. And AJ was on the money with his refereence to Damon Runyan. I say Nelson Algren, too, like in "A Bottle of Milk for Mother." I'm a new Ayris fan. Am homored to be publishing his work in YELLOW MAMA's Valentine's Day issue.<br /><br />Cindy Rosmus,<br />YELLOW MAMACindy Rosmushttp://Like Jodi says, the hitman's voice is gripping. Love the Cockney accent, adds to this piece. And AJ was on the money with his refereence to Damon Runyan. I say Nelson Algren, too, like in "A Bottle of Milk for Mother." I'm a new Ayris fan. Am homored to be publishing his work in YELLOW MAMA's Valentine's Day issue.noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-47211467028968799642010-08-26T15:03:39.272-05:002010-08-26T15:03:39.272-05:00Streetwise and bleakwise. Cracker, Ian,and the tit...Streetwise and bleakwise. Cracker, Ian,and the title is spot on.Cekanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-79304157128481811232010-08-25T23:38:23.703-05:002010-08-25T23:38:23.703-05:00Geeze Ian. That's some hat you got, the one yo...Geeze Ian. That's some hat you got, the one you keep puling this great stuff out of. No Arms Maurice and Harry the Hatchet alone make the thing authentic. Damon Runyon would love those names. Not a foot put wrong here. Everything falls into the next, steady and inevitable. Funny, dark stuff. Cool.AJ Hayesnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-31362835410415624092010-08-25T15:46:10.629-05:002010-08-25T15:46:10.629-05:00The voice of the hitman is captivating, good suspe...The voice of the hitman is captivating, good suspense build up (1-2-3) with a‘Andycappin, neecappin, kidnappin.’ ending. Great stuff, Ian. Thanks for the read.Jodi MacArthurhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13373591664178281529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868832066925549024.post-51710488966883714402010-08-25T11:48:42.343-05:002010-08-25T11:48:42.343-05:00Gritty dialogue, Ian. Well done. Please drop me a ...Gritty dialogue, Ian. Well done. Please drop me a line at anonwrite9@gmail.com<br />Anonymous-9Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com